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Tuesday, May 03, 2005

What in the punch bowl?

This is a tag that's going around right now. I decided to do my own four line poem before I got tagged. The first and third lines have to be Turd in a punch bowl and the second and fourth must rhyme.

Turd in a punch bowl
Looking forlorn
Turd in a punch bowl
I'm feeling quite torn

It may not be the best, but I put mine in before I got tagged! And, believe me, I know I'm not up for blog poet laureate.

9 comments

Blogger Bucky Four-Eyes said...

A little preemptive poetry, eh? Afraid someone might tag you?

That was really beautiful.

Tue May 03, 08:22:00 PM  
Blogger Squirl said...

Yes, BuckyI was sure you would tag me. I'm glad you appreciate the inherent beauty in my poetry. gag, gag

Tue May 03, 08:28:00 PM  
Blogger Courtney said...

What's the movie (was it Caddyshack?), with the Baby Ruth in the swimming pool? That's what your poem reminds me of.

"Who's more twisted? The twisted person, or the twisted person who reads the twisted person?"

Screw the chicken, and her egg!

Tue May 03, 09:04:00 PM  
Blogger Kitty said...

Funny thing is, ae and I were sitting here making song lyrics to that :-).

Tue May 03, 10:05:00 PM  
Blogger greatwhitebear said...

turd in a punch bowl
what a pity
turd in a punch bowl
now ain't that shitty!

Tue May 03, 10:30:00 PM  
Anonymous LadyBug said...

Seriously, now...with this meme going around, will any of us EVER be able to look at a punch bowl in the same way again?

Wed May 04, 09:55:00 AM  
Blogger Squirl said...

Courtney, that sounds pretty existential, or something like that. :-)

Kitty, would you and he do an audio of that? Pretty please!

GreatWhit I think that one's closest to the heart of the thing. Sorry for mixing up body parts there.

Ladybug I'm afraid that none of us will ever drink punch again. We will be so thirsty at all those showers and parties.

Wed May 04, 10:02:00 AM  
Blogger Mr. Bloggerific Himself said...

turd in a punch bowl
perturbed paunch starts to roll
turd in a punch bowl
better put down my pole

(recycled from my post on Bucky's, sorry, one entry per game)

Wed May 04, 10:02:00 AM  
Blogger Squirl said...

Mr B one entry per game is fair.

Wed May 04, 06:52:00 PM  

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